Some Ideas!! - The transition after the pop. It needs to be a bit faster perhaps. 2:08 - The young clown holding the balloon. He should be stage left so the transition back to the old clown is clean. - Also if you could send me the photo of your title I can make up a 3D glow pass for it.
yeah i agree.. the pop needs to have more impact. ive found it i transition too fast into the flash back the audience is a bit disorientated. but i think once i have the first few shots of the flash back, i can play around with the timing more.
and the title.. i made the wire template. but still looking at it and not happy, now watching the animation in full i not sure it a broken globe is the way to go. i like the idea of the text turning into a balloon (just one).
i will work on something tomorrow and send it through with a more detailed thought.
Unreal
ReplyDeleteFirst of all excellent excellent work!!
ReplyDeleteWell done.
Some Ideas!!
- The transition after the pop. It needs to be a bit faster perhaps.
2:08 - The young clown holding the balloon. He should be stage left so the transition back to the old clown is clean.
- Also if you could send me the photo of your title I can make up a 3D glow pass for it.
Great work
Jack
cheers :)
ReplyDeleteyeah i agree.. the pop needs to have more impact. ive found it i transition too fast into the flash back the audience is a bit disorientated. but i think once i have the first few shots of the flash back, i can play around with the timing more.
and the title.. i made the wire template. but still looking at it and not happy, now watching the animation in full i not sure it a broken globe is the way to go.
i like the idea of the text turning into a balloon (just one).
i will work on something tomorrow and send it through with a more detailed thought.
cheers again for your help Jack
Seamus
Hi Seamus,
ReplyDeleteHave posted an idea for the titles on our main blog.
http://prj226.blogspot.com/2010/10/blown-away-titles.html
Jack